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Sorrowful Restraint
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Sorrowful Restraint |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I still wait to soar To find myself. No light in the sky I stay shelved; Only a face to adore. There’s still that feeling, Inside of me That only with you, Can I be free. Sorrow restrains healing. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Nice! the last line is so true. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow for something so short. It really did blow me away! haha Last line was really true. Keep up the writing!!!  -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Zach, Thanks! From your writing I take it that you can probably relate to this. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
haha yes very much so i can relate. When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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