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GothicCherry
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0 posted 01-21-2009 08:15 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GothicCherry


I still wait to soar
To find myself.
No light in the sky
I stay shelved;
Only a face to adore.

Thereís still that feeling,
Inside of me
That only with you,
Can I be free.
Sorrow restrains healing.
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1 posted 01-21-2009 09:10 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Nice! the last line is so true.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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2 posted 01-27-2009 10:45 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow for something so short. It really did blow me away! haha Last line was really true.
Keep up the writing!!!


-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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Zach, Thanks! From your writing I take it that you can probably relate to this.
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4 posted 01-27-2009 10:52 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

haha yes very much so i can relate.

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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