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Singing To Insanity

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Octave
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Singing To Insanity

Sitting on our wooden swing
Singing to the sun
Hand in hand, side by side
Merry with the rum

The leaves whisper niceties
In the creak of our dizzy rage
Raining down with sequins
Watercolours on the page

Hopping to the skip of us
Dancing in the square
Dodging broken glass
Breeze tangled in our hair

We catch the curdled clouds
Chew them in our hands
Slice up the choking moon
Into silver strands

Voices sing forbidden tune
Waltzing through the air
Spangled eyes, ashen skin
Chanting truth or dare

Swallowed into black holes
Minds knotted in disorder
Hearts thrashing in the chaos
As we tease along the border

Of reason and insanity
Weíre singing to the sun
Cheek to cheek, hand in hand
Donít stop until we can.
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freeand2sexy
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Awesomeness!!! it flows so nicely

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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2 posted 01-22-2009 07:49 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Hahaha.. This made me laugh. lol. Your really good at using words. Better then I am at least! lol. Great work!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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