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Midnight Rose

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0 posted 01-21-2009 09:12 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for prettypinkrebel


Your like a rose of black still holding my heart
I scream in silence
As you look at me with a hateful stare only to see me shed the last tear
The blood flows from my wrist as my soul intensely fills with sadness
As death shows its face the final kiss the razor blade let the blood dismiss
I cant take this anymore, this empty lonliness
My heart is a pure tent of torment a suicidal abiss
The hole of my heart has black bleeding through it silently
Leaving me missing you as emotionally i die
quietly wondering if you care
laying here staring into this midnight rose....
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1 posted 01-22-2009 10:23 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Whoa! great description!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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2 posted 01-24-2009 09:16 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I admit, that was gory. Nice literary uses, but hun, if that is you in your poem, don't do it, there are other options.

-Kate

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