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prettypinkrebel
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0 posted 2009-01-21 09:12 AM



Your like a rose of black still holding my heart
I scream in silence
As you look at me with a hateful stare only to see me shed the last tear
The blood flows from my wrist as my soul intensely fills with sadness
As death shows its face the final kiss the razor blade let the blood dismiss
I cant take this anymore, this empty lonliness
My heart is a pure tent of torment a suicidal abiss
The hole of my heart has black bleeding through it silently
Leaving me missing you as emotionally i die
quietly wondering if you care
laying here staring into this midnight rose....

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1 posted 2009-01-22 10:23 AM


Whoa! great description!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2009-01-24 09:16 AM


I admit, that was gory. Nice literary uses, but hun, if that is you in your poem, don't do it, there are other options.

-Kate

"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

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