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Teen Poetry #9

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lilmissflyaway
Junior Member

since 2009-01-19

Posts 15
ohio,usa

0 posted 2009-01-20 04:31 PM

i don't know
what i expected
to see
as i looked in youe eyes
understanding
ha yeah right
forgiveness
like you gave a damn in the first place
i thought you cared about me
how stupid and naive
i was
but not anymore
you say you want me back
but this time
you cant have what
you want
this time its my turn
it's over
we're through
say goodbye and walk away
cause i dont have anything left
here
for you
theres nothing we can or could do
we just weren't meant
to be
i cant deal with all the
hurt and deception
all over aagain
all lies and goodbyes
i wasnt enough for you then
so what makes you think
that i am now
i cant deal with all the heartache
all over again
we're through

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-01-20 05:04 PM

Oh wow.. I just broke up with my boyfriend a while ago and your poem just says it all. Great work.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

2 posted 2009-01-21 08:49 AM

wow I totally need to use this! It's exactly the way i feel :]

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