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lilmissflyaway
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what do you see
when you look at me
do you see the real me
ot the fake me
my false facade
do you see
the real me
how broken i am inside
or do you see the fake me
and how unbroken i seem
what do you see
are you just
gonna be like everyone else
and not take that chance
that risk
when you look at me
what do you see
the girl i appear to be
or the real me
what do you see

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1 posted 01-20-2009 08:14 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow I was reading this and It reminded me of one of my poems that I wrote.. It almost sounded just like this. lol. This poem is still good though.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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This is a very nice poem
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