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Teen Poetry #9

This Broken Clock

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2009-01-20 12:05 PM

Hi Guys... i dunno i'm just far too depressed to write anything decent these days... life's hard.. raising this baby is hard and i'm trying so hard not to give up..

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This broken clocks my comfort,
It’ll help me sleep tonight
Another night without you
And nothing’s going right

I’m holding onto this broken heart
That’s still beating through the pain
Trying to find its meaning
But it’s driving me insane

The days are longer than before
The nights I spend alone
With broken memories of our life
And praying you’ll come home

Your daughters growing up real big
She’s more like you every day
Her mummy’s falling to pieces
And there’s nothing left to say

This broken clocks my comfort
It’ll help me sleep tonight
Just another night without you
And I’m drowning here in fright

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-01-20 08:08 AM

Awww hunni... I'm sorry your hurting.. *hugs* Stay strong hunni.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2009-01-20 07:14 PM

I'm hoping and praying that life gets better for you, really nice poem as well.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

Rocheal
Junior Member

since 2009-03-15

Posts 25

3 posted 2009-03-15 10:33 PM

I am so sorry you're having such a hard time. Things will surely get easier in time.

Another wonderful piece from you.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

4 posted 2009-03-16 08:47 AM

Ugh. Depression sucks. But your writing is still very good..

I pray things start getting easier for you.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

5 posted 2009-03-17 04:30 PM

im so sorry jess. but a great piece of literature here.

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