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RevengeIsMine
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Australia


0 posted 01-20-2009 12:05 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine


Hi Guys... i dunno i'm just far too depressed to write anything decent these days... life's hard.. raising this baby is hard and i'm trying so hard not to give up..

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This broken clocks my comfort,
Itíll help me sleep tonight
Another night without you
And nothingís going right

Iím holding onto this broken heart
Thatís still beating through the pain
Trying to find its meaning
But itís driving me insane

The days are longer than before
The nights I spend alone
With broken memories of our life
And praying youíll come home

Your daughters growing up real big
Sheís more like you every day
Her mummyís falling to pieces
And thereís nothing left to say

This broken clocks my comfort
Itíll help me sleep tonight
Just another night without you
And Iím drowning here in fright
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Small town, Illinois


1 posted 01-20-2009 08:08 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Awww hunni... I'm sorry your hurting.. *hugs* Stay strong hunni.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


2 posted 01-20-2009 07:14 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I'm hoping and praying that life gets better for you, really nice poem as well.  

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

Rocheal
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since 03-15-2009
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3 posted 03-15-2009 10:33 PM       View Profile for Rocheal   Email Rocheal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rocheal

I am so sorry you're having such a hard time. Things will surely get easier in time.

Another wonderful piece from you.
GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
Posts 471
TN


4 posted 03-16-2009 08:47 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Ugh. Depression sucks. But your writing is still very good..

I pray things start getting easier for you.
Clockwork_Orange
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Space Camp, IN


5 posted 03-17-2009 04:30 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

im so sorry jess. but a great piece of literature here.
 
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