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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 01-19-2009 10:18 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

With every letter I sent to you
A piece of my heart was sealed within.
Conealed within the words.
Love was pouring out for you.

All my days were spent writing,
as this letter of love grew longer.
Now as I sent that final letter
I've realized my hearts all gone.

Long nights spent without sleep
Praying in the moonlight
That you would reply.
And share the same feelings for me.

It's all over and done with now,
there's nothing left to hear...
I'm done with the same empty excuse,
everything's finished with you.

You wasted my heart on those empty letters
I wasted tears at the thought of you.
But I relize now I'm better off
Now a cold heart all remains.

Broken and dirty
this heart lay's on the ground.
No longer beating its rhythm,
no longer living for you.

With ever tear that I cried
My heart sewed another stitch
But now its a solid nothing
Another heart wasted on you.

I don't know what to do anymore,
everything I've worked for is gone.
All my dreams were in those letters...
but now I realize those were nightmares.

Another broken soul goes out tonight.
Longing for something more.
But on this cold bitter night it screams
"I'll never be yours."

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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1 posted 01-19-2009 10:20 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I can see your getting better at writing Julianna! Sorta obvious there. But anywho... it was great writing with ya. lol

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 01-19-2009 10:23 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

lol, thanks zach! i've read tons of your's and its all been amazing, lol. and its been super fun working with you too!!

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 01-19-2009 11:35 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Well done guys, great job...!!
prettypinkrebel
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4 posted 01-20-2009 08:52 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

this is GREAT!!!!! I absolutely love it great work you two =]
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