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0 posted 01-19-2009 08:36 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen&paper

I'll never live up to their expectations
Never do exactly as they want
I'll never be able to truly please them
Three thoughts which continue to haunt

You tell me
I'm great
Never should I change
I still can't understand...
Why do you put up with me?

Please...
I dont ever want to rememeber
What life was like before you
Wipe out the recollection completely
And just hold me here forever

For the first time, because of you,
Someone sees the best in me
For once, I matter
No longer am I just 'some girl'
I'm your girl
And that's all I ever want to be
You took the 'just'
Out of "just Cierra Leigh"
© Copyright 2009 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-19-2009 09:29 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Wow, when I was first reading this piece I honestly didn't know what to expect. Throughout your writing it kept getting better and better, and I like the way you had some rhyming in there too!
When I came to the last stanza I was like "aww...!!!!", so it was really good.
Library fer sure.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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2 posted 01-20-2009 12:11 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

This is great.. made me cry.. maybe cause i wish that somebody would take the just from my name..
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3 posted 01-20-2009 07:55 AM       View Profile for lilmissflyaway   Email lilmissflyaway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissflyaway

i love it
it was rlyy good
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4 posted 01-20-2009 08:11 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Aww this is soo sweet. Happy endings always make me smile. hehehe.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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5 posted 01-20-2009 08:49 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

OMG so unexpected but I totally love it yay library for sure great right
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6 posted 01-20-2009 09:55 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You brought the past alive with this, as our names sound similar...I like this very much, as I remember the time when the "just" was removed from my name too.

Thank you for the love of this.

 
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