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Falling rain
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I guess it wasn't right
to throw all your stuff out
Because you dared to break my heart
Don't bother screaming or shout.

I guess I was wrong
When I told you good-bye
I know you still love me
But I'm starting to think that's a lie.

My life pretty much sucks
And you know this too
Because you stole a piece of me
And my life is empty without you

I try to move on
But memories won't let me go
I trusted you with the key
But you used me so.

I shouldn't miss you
Because what is there to miss?
You promised little
And didn't even give me one kiss.

My heart and head
Are getting in another fight
Don't know what to do...
Lost my sense of what is right  
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
lilmissflyaway
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1 posted 01-19-2009 02:02 PM       View Profile for lilmissflyaway   Email lilmissflyaway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissflyaway

i really liked it
i totally get where your coming from
Elias Nevermore
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2 posted 01-19-2009 03:37 PM       View Profile for Elias Nevermore   Email Elias Nevermore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elias Nevermore

nice poem zach, I really liked it.
KandyGrl511
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3 posted 02-28-2009 12:19 AM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

nice job!

<3 i love u<3

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4 posted 02-28-2009 12:27 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

what you need to do is to remember what you are worth, and realize that, that stupid little girl has no idea how wonderful you are, and you don't want or need anyone that doesn't think you are the best, ya know?



it's easy to forget that we deserve as much love as we give and if they can't give it back then they aren't worth getting yours!

stand up straight.
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5 posted 03-03-2009 08:49 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Ah, thanks Zach you got that stupid song stuck in my head
 
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