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lilmissflyaway
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0 posted 01-19-2009 03:04 AM       View Profile for lilmissflyaway   Email lilmissflyaway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissflyaway

i have no idea
so don't ask me
for i don't have a clue
there's no sign
to leadme on my way
no way to be sure
but the choice is mine
It's within me
carring me on my way
through everything
and it seems that
everything always leads back to you
but don't ask
cause i still dont have a clude
dont ask me

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1 posted 01-19-2009 09:42 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Welcome to Pip! I'm glad to see another poet on here to share their work. The poem you have written is pretty good for a first post!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

i3n07red12
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hey good poem..
GothicCherry
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I like the idea. The poem itself could use a little work, but I'm not one to critique on that. Nice first post.
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