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Elias Nevermore
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0 posted 01-19-2009 02:37 AM       View Profile for Elias Nevermore   Email Elias Nevermore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elias Nevermore

(Note: I have been gone from this site for a long time. However, I plan to start posting regularly again.)

Death is only a door
to a world filled
with something more

Its gates, planted
in the sky,
are waiting open wide

A new adventure
may lay behind
the doors to life

But those who seek
it must decide if
they will leave tonight

For in a moment
the gates will
close shut again

And the sky will
drop upon the earth
signaling the end

For the holy fury
will ignite its
wrath on the world

And those who
are left behind
will be burnt.



"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All
© Copyright 2009 Author Andrew E.L. - All Rights Reserved
lilmissflyaway
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since 01-19-2009
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ohio,usa


1 posted 01-19-2009 02:53 AM       View Profile for lilmissflyaway   Email lilmissflyaway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissflyaway

i rlyy liked it
i understand where ur comin from
Falling rain
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2 posted 01-19-2009 09:37 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Nice write. Glad to have you back.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 01-20-2009 07:07 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Nice poem, but to be honest, maybe i'm just out of it today, but i don't get it.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.
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