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I Really Miss You Baby

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i really miss you baby
and no bourbons gonna get me through
this ache just wont go away
its the kind that grows with age

and no other lover
can compete with you
no one feels the same
and i cant forget you saying my name

its like a part of me dies
every time i think of your eyes
and even though the days go by
im still caught up with you

and i really miss you baby
and no bourbon will get me through
this ache just wont go away
its the kind that eats me day after day
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1 posted 01-18-2009 11:21 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Okay so the last stanza was just plain awesome and amazing. lol. Great work!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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