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Teen Poetry #9

I Really Miss You Baby

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2009-01-17 10:48 PM

i really miss you baby
and no bourbons gonna get me through
this ache just wont go away
its the kind that grows with age

and no other lover
can compete with you
no one feels the same
and i cant forget you saying my name

its like a part of me dies
every time i think of your eyes
and even though the days go by
im still caught up with you

and i really miss you baby
and no bourbon will get me through
this ache just wont go away
its the kind that eats me day after day

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-01-18 11:21 AM

Okay so the last stanza was just plain awesome and amazing. lol. Great work!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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