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0 posted 2009-01-17 09:50 PM


So...this is something I did for my english class in school. We were supposed to choose something that we liked/disliked and pretend to be that thing. In the poem we had to give clues as to what we are and in the last stanza, we had to say what we are. This is what I did, hope you like it.

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Somewhere way up high
I look down on the souls of life.
Mindlessly moving among the streets
where they silently fear my preasence.

Packed up and put away
they all try to forget about me.
Soaring high where I'm free...
its like the world has just stopped.

I can see it in your eyes,
as I'm ready to attack.
I am the crow that kills,
I am the one who haunts your dreams.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

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1 posted 2009-01-17 09:54 PM


Ahh! Crows!! Nasty little birds... *shudders* Good poem tho!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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