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benjamenbutton09
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0 posted 01-17-2009 12:04 AM       View Profile for benjamenbutton09   Email benjamenbutton09   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for benjamenbutton09

we fell part so many times
it was always my fault
i did the crimes
im truly sorry
i know well never be again
but i just want you to know
that still i love you
just never again
we should just stay friends
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1 posted 01-17-2009 11:58 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Welcome to Pip! I like where your going with this. I'd work a little bit more on it. It sounds sorta unfinished but its still good!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

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thanks..
 
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