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To Have You With Me

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 01-15-2009 09:40 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed


To Have You With Me

I forgot to tell you
Years ago
That I never hoped
To gain back the memories
That were lost for all time

It rained here last night
The drops stayed on the glass
That I looked through
Watching, hoping, waiting
For you

You never came,
And I knew you couldn’t
But the moonlight gleaming
On the snow
Was as deceptive as lost love

Memories flooded back
Tears washed my face
Pain ached my heart
I wished on all I knew
To have you with me


"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 01-15-2009 06:14 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

WOW.. i felt all that... every single last word.. Love it!!!... I've felt that feeling so many times... And just when you think u can hear the footsteps you realised its only the rain getting harder...

Loved it hunni, love you...

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 01-16-2009 09:24 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I think this is one of my most favorite poems, just because it has so many different interpretations. I love you too Jess. Thanks for reading.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 01-18-2009 06:44 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

OH my goodness!! That was AWESOME Kate I mean WOW!!
I can allredy see almost four different ways to translate that and I've barely scrached the surface!

Wow just wow...this may be you're best poem ever!

My melancholy is purely my own

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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4 posted 01-18-2009 06:48 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Email me Frank, I'm dieing to hear your interpretations!!!!!!!!!!! Gahhhh, why didn't you just post them here?!?!?!

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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