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Not A Day Goes By

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0 posted 01-14-2009 11:04 PM       View Profile for notadaygoesby   Email notadaygoesby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for notadaygoesby


Not a day goes by without me thinking of her
Not a day goes by without me longing for her

On and on the days go by
But to no avail she doesn't notice me
I love her she doesnt love me
my own frustration makes me wanna cry

Not a day goes by without me thinking of her
Not a day goes by without me longing for her

I love her bad
But to her im a friend
how on earth can i get that to end
my own desperation makes me so sad
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1 posted 01-14-2009 11:30 PM       View Profile for notadaygoesby   Email notadaygoesby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for notadaygoesby

srry ppl this is my first poem and i didnt do so good but plz bear with me cuz i hope to get better and better as u correct me
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2 posted 01-14-2009 11:34 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Welcome to Pip!

As long as you write what's in your heart, you will do just fine

I understand these emotions very very well.


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3 posted 01-15-2009 09:43 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Welcome to PIP. It's alright, we all have to start somewhere, and this was a good start.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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4 posted 01-15-2009 05:36 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

great first post, cant wait to see more from you. welcome to pip!
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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5 posted 01-15-2009 08:09 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

well I liked it. It did seem a bit choppy but that's something that's sometimes hard to work out. But either than that, i think it's wonderful. Great frist post, and welcome to pip!  hope to see more soon,

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
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6 posted 01-16-2009 07:01 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

heyyyy welcome to pip!! this was really good, i loved it. cant wait to see more from u!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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