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Teen Poetry #9

Not A Day Goes By

notadaygoesby
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since 2009-01-14

Posts 4

0 posted 2009-01-14 11:04 PM

Not a day goes by without me thinking of her
Not a day goes by without me longing for her

On and on the days go by
But to no avail she doesn't notice me
I love her she doesnt love me
my own frustration makes me wanna cry

Not a day goes by without me thinking of her
Not a day goes by without me longing for her

I love her bad
But to her im a friend
how on earth can i get that to end
my own desperation makes me so sad

notadaygoesby
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since 2009-01-14

Posts 4

1 posted 2009-01-14 11:30 PM

srry ppl this is my first poem and i didnt do so good but plz bear with me cuz i hope to get better and better as u correct me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-01-14 11:34 PM

Welcome to Pip!

As long as you write what's in your heart, you will do just fine

I understand these emotions very very well.

*please check your email for a special greeting!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2009-01-15 09:43 AM

Welcome to PIP. It's alright, we all have to start somewhere, and this was a good start.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

4 posted 2009-01-15 05:36 PM

great first post, cant wait to see more from you. welcome to pip!
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2009-01-15 08:09 PM

well I liked it. It did seem a bit choppy but that's something that's sometimes hard to work out. But either than that, i think it's wonderful. Great frist post, and welcome to pip! hope to see more soon,

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2009-01-16 07:01 PM

heyyyy welcome to pip!! this was really good, i loved it. cant wait to see more from u!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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