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freeand2sexy
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I'm going off
To see
The world

There is
No need
To worry

I'll be
Safe
And sound

Be back
In a
While

There's no need
For me
To hurry

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

© Copyright 2009 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
Marc-Andre
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1 posted 01-12-2009 09:35 PM       View Profile for Marc-Andre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marc-Andre

Enjoy the world, keep in touch and keep posting Well-penned. Mark
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2 posted 01-12-2009 10:14 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Short, sweet and to the point. Keep up the good work!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal


3 posted 01-13-2009 01:14 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

So casual and worry-free. Sounds like a note left for an over-protective parent.
Good job!

There is power in the pen.

freeand2sexy
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4 posted 01-13-2009 07:19 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Thanks, i actually wrote it as a note to someone than seperated the sentences into short lines.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

crimsonXnails
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dark/little/heavan.:*:.


5 posted 01-14-2009 04:52 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

very unique, i like it! keep it up
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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