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young_blood
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(Untitled) 1/12/2009

There were times when
living
with ghosts made me feel younger,
but lately I've felt gravely aged.
© Copyright 2009 Alex Lewis - All Rights Reserved
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Great stuff!

My melancholy is purely my own

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Earl, are you laughing at the irony?
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Puahahaha, this is great stuff! But I can't help but feel there's some deep, hidden meaning WAY underneath the irony...Paranoia?

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Haha, Ironic indeed.. I sorta understand the meaning here. But explaining always helps.

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Well said young_blood, well said. I think i know what ur saying..

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Very simply put: Hanging onto old memories may make you feel young, but in the end, they only drag you down. Thanks for reading everyone!
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Yes yes I was laughing at the irony! I mean it was FUNNY! I'm not always in the mood to desect things you know...(and your stuff takes so much TIME...)

My melancholy is purely my own

 
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