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Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder


0 posted 01-12-2009 05:13 AM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Abbeon


I was so little, and you took it away.
I didn't know the difference that horrible day,
And now my greatest gift to give is something I lack.
For what you did was take what I can never get back.

I trusted you, I was so innocent, so small,
You took me by the hand and lead me down the hall,
You gave me a drink, and said you'd take me for my nap,
I was so little sitting on your lap.

You drugged me, made it so I'd fall asleep.
Took of my clothes, left them in a heap,
You touched me in ways I didn't like,
Did it gave you great joy to rape that little tyke?

Now I'm standing here as a woman and beautiful and strong,
And I'd like to tell you what you did was wrong,
You hurt me in ways that can never go back,
But its not just my innocents that I lack.

You broke my trust that fateful day,
And now I can say what I want to say,
I don't want to hate you in fact I forgive,
Because its time to move on, and I need to live,

You took away from me a lot of my trust,
And I have been raped again this time for lust,
But thats it, its over, I'm done,
But guess what this time I have won.

Because I Don't Care,
What you did to me was unfair,
But guess what, You didn't hold me down,
I'm not going to be passed around.

I just want to say I forgive you,
But I wonder if you'd forgive me if you knew.
That I am releasing the hurt,
From the wound thats spreading Scarlet across my shirt.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

© Copyright 2009 Rebecca Mackie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-12-2009 04:46 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

ahww hunni this is amazing i love it!!
wherever did you come up with this?!?!?!?! thje topic?!?! txt mee
Krysti
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2 posted 01-12-2009 05:18 PM       View Profile for wwzwlmd8   Email wwzwlmd8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wwzwlmd8

WOW THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD AND I LOVE THIS POEM

~Indya

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3 posted 01-13-2009 08:21 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

wow!! This is really really good! I'm sorry you had to go through that but I'm glad that you were able to forgive him.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

crimsonXnails
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4 posted 01-14-2009 05:04 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

AHHH, stop making me cry! beautifully written and even more meaningful.
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder


5 posted 01-14-2009 07:43 PM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

Hunnie, thats a a true story. I got tired of writting false things, so i decided to go back to the basic's. Thank you, but to me this was not as hard as i thought, and i hope to soon be back to my own level of standar poems. Thank you so much.

Rebecca Jade.
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6 posted 01-16-2009 07:32 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

FANTASTIC! loved i

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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