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Broken sun

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The man you had
He seemed to treat you good
That was the last time I saw the faith you had in your eyes
What happens now?

Ill just walk back to my car
Leave you with the one thing I want
I had to just turn away
Your heart is already gone
He was the one I knew would win

I kept waiting for that moment to come
I want your love
When will it come?
Will it crash into this broken sun?

The times I wanted to spend with you
I need to figure out whatís wrong
The free fall my heart gave me
Why did it just fall?
I hope what I have isnít gone

I will climb out of the bottom of this valley
Maybe it has something for me along the way
Itís my goal just to get out of this hole

I want one starry night
So I can hold my head up and leave you alone
But now youíre leaving on the first flight
To get out of this dust bowl
Those words I had to say
I have kept in all my life
They will never leave me
Till the day I leave earth behind
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