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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 01-10-2009 08:31 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

yeah..so this is a song i wrote over the Christmas break and it's not entirely finished yet..like i need a title so..yeah, anywho..here it is:

You walk past her in the halls,
no one seems to see her at all,
and there's one thing
that you should know,
she's no angel.
There's no light,
There's no time,
she's alone.

There's a house but there's no home,
she's got some friends
but she's still alone.
And there's no one to say goodbye to,
so she's gone.

We could have stopped her,
we should have saved her,
she wasn't alone.

And there's no one to say goodbye to,
no one to help her get through.
There's no light,
there's no time,
so she's gone.

{~~*~~}
© Copyright 2009 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-10-2009 08:41 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Awwwwwww.. this poems sad but good. I'd call it... "Fading, Fading, She's gone"

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

crimsonXnails
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dark/little/heavan.:*:.


2 posted 01-14-2009 05:07 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

emma lee, you have to teach me to play that on piano, every time i read it it makes me want to hear it, but i cant unless ur here!!! argh. srry i cant help u with a title, i always suck at those.
<3 ya hun,
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 01-15-2009 01:32 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Emmi Hunni.. I love ur song... It's amazing.. Your amazing... Be Strong Pretty Girl... I'll Carry You When You Get Tired
XxForever.BrokenxX
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4 posted 01-15-2009 07:57 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thanks Jess, and i know you will.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}

prettypinkrebel
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5 posted 01-16-2009 08:42 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

Wow this is GREAT!!! I really love this one emma.
~~Adreanna Leigh
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6 posted 01-16-2009 07:09 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

great song! loved it, wish i could hear the tune

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

wwzwlmd8
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7 posted 01-17-2009 07:13 PM       View Profile for wwzwlmd8   Email wwzwlmd8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wwzwlmd8

i love this song can't what to hear more

~Indya

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