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slipping through the cracks

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NicoleRocker12367
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Falling failing
Slipping out of reach
Cracks opening up
For me to fall through


Clawing Reaching
Trying to escape
The fate planned for me
It seems impossible

No one hears
my desperate pleas for help
no matter how hard
no matter how loud
I scream

a hand grabs my ankle
clutching so hard
pulling me down
down into the ground

I can't escape my mind
and the monster it has become
it seems no angel
could ever save me
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1 posted 01-09-2009 10:09 AM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

O wow! I'm really amazed this poem is great! however I hope that you don't fele alone.
 
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