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What is life?
The beauty of what you get in the end
What if I canít get her back?
I want to be a big star player
But that wonít bring you back

Is there nothing that can help me now?
Tell me what do I live for?
Tell me if I can have that crutch
The failing of this town
Itís only in my mind here
I thought you felt the same way
But that was just to please
My simple mind

Can I call you Alison?
Or is that just a name that I havenít understood
Youíre unique
Sometimes I thought you were the only one
I hope I feel the same way
When I see you again
Will that day come?
When will I see you alone?

I want to speak the words on my mind
Those words wonít be forgotten
They wonít be gone
Time is changing me
Iím sure itís played with you too
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Your style isn't my favorite type of writing but your still good using words in writing. Keep trying on it and I'm sure you'll get something pretty great.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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