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NicoleRocker12367
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since 01-07-2009
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MA, United States


0 posted 01-07-2009 09:24 PM       View Profile for NicoleRocker12367   Email NicoleRocker12367   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NicoleRocker12367's Home Page   View IP for NicoleRocker12367

A overwhelming feeling
washes over me
just at the sight of you
my heart yearns for you

I stare at you
And see a halo surrounding you
an angelic look indeed

No one knows why
I love you
But I shall never tell
a secret not even you know

They call this feeling a crush
They say it will pass
but I can not beleive
how this could dissapear

A tale of Shakespeare
Is what I call it
Love beyond imaginable
but you do not share
this love I have for you


You are my Romeo
a person who I love
but not sharing it
I guess you are my crush




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gdcod2player
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since 07-26-2008
Posts 116


1 posted 01-07-2009 10:24 PM       View Profile for gdcod2player   Email gdcod2player   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gdcod2player

wow that was what i have been needing to read
amazing
lots of emotion
notadaygoesby
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since 01-14-2009
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2 posted 01-14-2009 11:52 PM       View Profile for notadaygoesby   Email notadaygoesby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for notadaygoesby

wow i feel the exact same way except the im a guy
RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
Posts 832
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3 posted 01-15-2009 06:24 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Welcome To PIP I haven't seen u around these days.. First Off... Loved your poem... reminds me of loving an older boy, older man, teacher even.. but thats just me... Anyhow.. Welcome.. hope too be reading more
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 01-16-2009 09:27 AM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

this was a really great write from you. this is the first thing i've read from you and i liked it alot. i went through this for a year now, and it ended horribly...but i hope yours turns out amazing and happy
just one point of critique...in the first stanza, 1st line, where you have "A overwhelming..." it should be "An overwhelming" because of the grammer thing.
but other than that i totally loved it!!!
library.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

Falling rain
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5 posted 01-16-2009 06:07 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Pretty cool poem. Free style poems aren't my type of thing but you pull it off pretty well. Welcome to Pip! Glad to have you here to share some of your work!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

wwzwlmd8
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since 09-23-2006
Posts 96
San Diego,CA


6 posted 01-17-2009 07:10 PM       View Profile for wwzwlmd8   Email wwzwlmd8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wwzwlmd8

this poem is how i use to feel about someone i loved.

~Indya

 
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