this was a really great write from you. this is the first thing i've read from you and i liked it alot. i went through this for a year now, and it ended horribly...but i hope yours turns out amazing and happy
just one point of critique...in the first stanza, 1st line, where you have "A overwhelming..." it should be "An overwhelming" because of the grammer thing.
but other than that i totally loved it!!!
these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again