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NicoleRocker12367
Junior Member
since 2009-01-07
Posts 12
MA, United States

0 posted 2009-01-07 09:05 PM


Today I watch
Watching, Waiting
My foot searches for a clutch
But there isn’t one for the taking

I move gently forward
I see a deadly crash
I begin moving toward
The light of heaven

Suddenly I jerk up
I believe it is all just a dream.
I feel for my cup
That is filled all with cream

I take a long sip.
But suddenly the scene changes.
And I’m about to take a deadly dip.

I watch myself
It is all like a movie.
I think of this
And begin to get woozy


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young_blood
Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
1 posted 2009-01-08 08:13 AM


Glad to see a new poster here, keep writing! Look at other people's stuff too and feel free to leave comments. Welcome to PIPtalk!
GothicCherry
Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2009-03-20 09:09 AM


Love the last stanza

KandyGrl511
Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52
Michigan
3 posted 2009-03-21 11:11 PM


I Like this poem! Awesome Job
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