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The dream

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NicoleRocker12367
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Today I watch
Watching, Waiting
My foot searches for a clutch
But there isnít one for the taking

I move gently forward
I see a deadly crash
I begin moving toward
The light of heaven

Suddenly I jerk up
I believe it is all just a dream.
I feel for my cup
That is filled all with cream

I take a long sip.
But suddenly the scene changes.
And Iím about to take a deadly dip.

I watch myself
It is all like a movie.
I think of this
And begin to get woozy

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young_blood
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Glad to see a new poster here, keep writing! Look at other people's stuff too and feel free to leave comments. Welcome to PIPtalk!
GothicCherry
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Love the last stanza
KandyGrl511
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I Like this poem! Awesome Job
 
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