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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2009-01-07 07:55 PM



Reaping Nightmares

Reaching out in wisps
Of what used to be my dream
It lingers
Staying, lying, laying,
Sticking to my sides

The chilling sweat
My urgent attempts
To pray, to plead
Impossible
To rid that horror
That builds within me

The cold, inside and out
Raising slick wet hair
From my arms, my neck
Potent and evil
I lay still
In mother’s bed

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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1 posted 2009-01-07 08:34 PM


Oh wow! that poem sent chills through out my body.. Great work hun!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Assassin_of_Verse
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2 posted 2009-01-09 01:25 AM


Gave me goosebumps, but I let out a sigh of relief at the end. Good job!

There is power in the pen.

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