that So Cal
My feelings are mixed for this one. On one hand, I like ur use of words. "passion you feel for the blue sky" "cruel joke" were some of them.
But for some reason, ur poem was littered with Korean letters! (I'm Korean btw) So some of the words were obscured...
Anyway, this was good, but personally I think that u've got more up ur sleeve. Thanks for sharing.
There is power in the pen.