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young_blood
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Reluctant Repose

My eyes flutter as I
undress
the ceiling,
searching for come cold
seeping through its skin,
but she shies away from my awkward
gaze.
The room rolls from side to side,
pitched
to and fro,
left then right,
right then left.
All care is being taken to leave
my mind
blank.
If only I could leave
my mind
then I might sleep.
© Copyright 2009 Alex Lewis - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-06-2009 06:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alex~

'If only I could leave
my mind
then I might sleep.'


Oh Alex ... I DO know this !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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young_blood
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thanks for reading.
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I've probably said this before, but I'll gladly say it again. I always enjoy reading your poems. It's like sifting through a sandbox for a lost toy. :]

There is power in the pen.

young_blood
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Why thank you. I do love to cover the treasure in sand every now and again.
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Amazing! I truly love reading your poetry!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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Oh! I love your word choice...
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i always love reading your poems so beautiful

i'm lost and going nowhere

 
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