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Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal


0 posted 01-05-2009 11:08 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

I'm a fan of long-distance

We're worlds apart. But I like it that way.
I'm afraid of you knowing me;
Of what you might say.

It's easy to smile at you, from far, far away.
In fact, that's exactly what I do:
Each and every day.

See what I mean? You'd be scared too.
If only you knew the things I'd do to you.

But don't worry. We've never met.
Maybe in dreams,
or your nightmares I bet.

I'm a fan of long-distance.
And a fan of you.


12/7/08
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rebelangelv
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1 posted 01-05-2009 11:10 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

awww i loved it. it was so deep yet sweet. great write!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

young_blood
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2 posted 01-07-2009 08:15 AM       View Profile for young_blood   Email young_blood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for young_blood

This was cool because there was an innocense through most of it, but the end has this kinda serrated edge to it.
Assassin_of_Verse
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3 posted 01-09-2009 01:24 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Thanks, rebelangel! Though to be honest, I didn't really envision this one as sweet...lol

Thanks for reading youngblood. It's been a while since I've written, so my writing's a bit different.

There is power in the pen.

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