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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
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that So Cal

0 posted 2009-01-05 11:08 PM


I'm a fan of long-distance

We're worlds apart. But I like it that way.
I'm afraid of you knowing me;
Of what you might say.

It's easy to smile at you, from far, far away.
In fact, that's exactly what I do:
Each and every day.

See what I mean? You'd be scared too.
If only you knew the things I'd do to you.

But don't worry. We've never met.
Maybe in dreams,
or your nightmares I bet.

I'm a fan of long-distance.
And a fan of you.


12/7/08

© Copyright 2009 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2009-01-05 11:10 PM


awww i loved it. it was so deep yet sweet. great write!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
2 posted 2009-01-07 08:15 AM


This was cool because there was an innocense through most of it, but the end has this kinda serrated edge to it.
Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal
3 posted 2009-01-09 01:24 AM


Thanks, rebelangel! Though to be honest, I didn't really envision this one as sweet...lol

Thanks for reading youngblood. It's been a while since I've written, so my writing's a bit different.

There is power in the pen.

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