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HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
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New Jersey


0 posted 01-02-2009 08:32 AM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss

Hey, it's been awhile. Let me know what you think.

Blame Game:


So sick of this double jeopardy,
Always paying for the same crime.
I cant defend myself anymore,
Been judged for all of time.

My tears can never cry away the sin,
My lips can never truly smile.
My dreams will always be haunted,
With images so dark and vile.

I can never truly heal,
The past was never behind.
Thrown in my face everyday,
Playing games within my mind.

I still cant look myself in the eyes,
Without feeling so much shame.
To know that loving eyes,
See me as the one to blame.

How can my past just leave scars,
How can these open wounds heal.
When all you do is accuse me,
To the point where I barely feel.

So numb and so cold,
Yet covered by rage.
Struggling to heal,
Release myself from this cage.

The stage and the lights,
Where the votes been cast in.
Iím branded and judged,
Iím the one with this sin.
© Copyright 2009 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
rhia_5779
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since 06-09-2006
Posts 1304
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1 posted 01-03-2009 12:17 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

Wow! This was really well done! I liked the way it just flowed smoothly as I read it. It all just connected together. I can relate too!
Rhia
freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
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2 posted 01-04-2009 04:25 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Very well written!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
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TN


3 posted 01-27-2009 09:41 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Enjoyed greatly...

Love your wording...
 
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