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Blame Game |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Hey, it's been awhile. Let me know what you think. Blame Game: So sick of this double jeopardy, Always paying for the same crime. I cant defend myself anymore, Been judged for all of time. My tears can never cry away the sin, My lips can never truly smile. My dreams will always be haunted, With images so dark and vile. I can never truly heal, The past was never behind. Thrown in my face everyday, Playing games within my mind. I still cant look myself in the eyes, Without feeling so much shame. To know that loving eyes, See me as the one to blame. How can my past just leave scars, How can these open wounds heal. When all you do is accuse me, To the point where I barely feel. So numb and so cold, Yet covered by rage. Struggling to heal, Release myself from this cage. The stage and the lights, Where the votes been cast in. I’m branded and judged, I’m the one with this sin. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Wow! This was really well done! I liked the way it just flowed smoothly as I read it. It all just connected together. I can relate too! Rhia |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Very well written! With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Enjoyed greatly... Love your wording... |
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