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Love_Skull
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0 posted 12-30-2008 09:07 PM       View Profile for Love_Skull   Email Love_Skull   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Love_Skull

to many times my heart has been broken
im tired of you thinking im a ride
he use me once,and again, and again
GO AWAY!!!i dont want your token

too many times i have been a fool
a fool to the world
i hated the day that i learned the truth
i wanted to think that it would be the same

to bad we grew apart...

to many times i have hurt so bad
i wish that it didnt hurt
when you feel so sad

to many times i have wanted to say something that couldn't be said
i didnt get a fair chance
to say i miss you
i wish i could once again see you
i wish that i got a chance to kiss you
one last time before that day...

to many times i have thought this in my head
every day when i wake up
and every night when i go to bed

all the time
every place
any time
all i want is to forget
that i was the one wrong...


by leah stonis


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stargal
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1 posted 12-31-2008 12:29 AM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Hi Leah Stonis,

I must admit that broken hearted/regret poems are not usually my type of poetry; I like yours though. The raw emotions expressed in this contributed greatly to the poem. Instead of sterile words I saw images, something that has happened less and less frequently. I enjoyed reading this poem. I am looking forward to seeing more of your poems if they're anything like this one. Thank you for sharing.

Stargal
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2 posted 12-31-2008 08:35 AM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen&paper

Awww Leah, I loved this. It actually made me cry a little, haha. Amazing job, going in my library.
GothicCherry
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3 posted 03-13-2009 08:35 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

"all the time
every place
any time
all i want is to forget
that i was the one wrong..."


This is EXACTLY how I feel right now. I enjoyed this.
 
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