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0 posted 12-30-2008 12:03 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen&paper

It's true-
I was afraid
But with a few simple words
You give me the strength
To let go of my fearful chains

I am secure now
And ashamed
I could not feel so before
Three words, holding so much power,
Thee words I could never honestly speak
Have become truth

It's almost odd
But it's the most beautiful sort of strange,
I have no other wish
No other desire,
Than to be with you
For as long as I possibly can

I dont feel like me
When you're gone
I need to see you again
To be completely myself

I promised you I loved you
I promise you I love you
I promise you I will always love you.
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1 posted 12-31-2008 08:20 PM       View Profile for gdcod2player   Email gdcod2player   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gdcod2player

very nice
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2 posted 01-27-2009 09:30 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

I love this poem! Very beautiful...

The last stanza is my favorite. The past, present, future tenses aren't normally so pronounced in many poems I have read.
 
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