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pen&paper
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0 posted 12-28-2008 08:15 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen&paper

I say I love you
And it's true
I do.
I'm just so scared
To let myself fall so far
I won't be able
To pick myself back up again

I've been fiercely independent
For so long
Constantly reminding myself
That I needed no one
And then you walked through the door
And everything I'd ever told myself
Was a lie

Trembling, I hold out my heart to you
It's wrapped, with a bow,
And underneath the wrapping are signs;warnings,
Which say 'Caution: Fragile"
Heed them!
For once broken
I may never be put back together again
© Copyright 2008 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
SlowlyFallAway
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1 posted 12-28-2008 09:11 PM       View Profile for SlowlyFallAway   Email SlowlyFallAway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SlowlyFallAway

I know the feeling. But all too often people don't listen to the warnings and then you end up disconnecting yourself from the world because you forget how to trust. I enjoy reading your poetry. Keep writing and keep your head up.
rhia_5779
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2 posted 12-30-2008 02:24 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

Wow I can totally relate and that doesn't happen often. I like how you conveyed it so simply but so powerfully!
Rhia
Love_Skull
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3 posted 12-30-2008 08:51 PM       View Profile for Love_Skull   Email Love_Skull   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Love_Skull

omg, luv the poem! i can relate to it so well, to bad my heart has been broken so many times...
love the poem!!! (library)
stargal
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4 posted 12-31-2008 12:24 AM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Hi Pen&Paper,

I really enjoyed this poem. I haven't seen any of yours lately and this was very pleasent to read. I was feeling a little mixed about your line breaks but the more I read this the more I like it. I think you did an excellent job. I am looking forward to reading some more from you.

Stargal
GothicCherry
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5 posted 01-27-2009 08:18 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Definately true! It's no wonder so many can relate when it occurs so many times in life.
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6 posted 01-27-2009 09:13 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Oh hun... I know that feeling all too well.. Sometimes that feeling of independence ruined my relationships. I don't know your situation but I thought I didn't need anyone and I was too cautious on who I dated. I understand where your coming from. My only advice is to be open with yourself but be careful.
Great write like usual.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know itís not for me, thatís when Iíll miss you.

 
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