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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
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At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2017-10-01 11:53 AM



I don't like where this path is going to
Feels like I'm bordering on insane
The days are becoming harder to get through
But no one sees the pain....

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-10-15 08:17 PM


"But no one sees the pain".

This may be because you wear it so well, Jack. I'd also say you likely carry it well.

“Surrender to what is. Let go of what was. Have faith in what will be”-  Sonia Ricotti

Be well, friend.

...just bein' Bluesy

effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2017-10-16 11:36 AM


Thank you Bluesy, you are spot on agsin. Appreciate your comments and the quote, take care my friend

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

sensationalpleasure69
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since 2018-02-05
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3 posted 2018-02-05 05:24 PM


no one sees the pain, but your expressive poem allows for one to feel it. thank you
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