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Night_Owl
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0 posted 04-15-2017 11:14 AM       View Profile for Night_Owl   Email Night_Owl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Night_Owl

Did you indeed perish
or just desirous thinking?
Has my mind wantonly provoked me
to believe it genuine?

Awakened by the echo of an uncertain scream
as my nightmare surrounds the darkness,
a menacing presence the terror is paralyzing;
is this a dream or actuality?

The panic is suffocating my ability to react;
my impulse is eager to vanish from sight.
Trapped in my nightmare without an escape,
melted into the shadows of a forgotten moment.

In my subconscious, why do you haunt?
With each visit, I flourish sharper.
You ripped the innocence from my soul,
but I held firmly to my spirit; of that you could not steal.

~ Judy C ~

© Copyright 2017 Judy Cennami - All Rights Reserved
Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 04-15-2017 05:46 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
"You ripped the innocence from my soul,
but I held firmly to my spirit; of that you could not steal"
I not only like these lines which I extracted from your good poetry, but I relate to them as well.

Excellente` Miss Owl.


...just bein' Bluesy
Night_Owl
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2 posted 04-15-2017 08:18 PM       View Profile for Night_Owl   Email Night_Owl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Night_Owl

Thank You! Your comments are much appreciated.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 04-15-2017 10:08 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You are most welcome Miss Owl. I wish to read more of you soon.

...just bein' Bluesy

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