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Dark Poetry #5

Trapped

Night_Owl
Junior Member
Posts 22

0 posted 2017-04-15 11:14 AM

Did you indeed perish
or just desirous thinking?
Has my mind wantonly provoked me
to believe it genuine?

Awakened by the echo of an uncertain scream
as my nightmare surrounds the darkness,
a menacing presence the terror is paralyzing;
is this a dream or actuality?

The panic is suffocating my ability to react;
my impulse is eager to vanish from sight.
Trapped in my nightmare without an escape,
melted into the shadows of a forgotten moment.

In my subconscious, why do you haunt?
With each visit, I flourish sharper.
You ripped the innocence from my soul,
but I held firmly to my spirit; of that you could not steal.

~ Judy C ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2017-04-15 05:46 PM

quote:
"You ripped the innocence from my soul,
but I held firmly to my spirit; of that you could not steal"

I not only like these lines which I extracted from your good poetry, but I relate to them as well.

Excellente` Miss Owl.

...just bein' Bluesy

Night_Owl
Junior Member
Posts 22

2 posted 2017-04-15 08:18 PM

Thank You! Your comments are much appreciated.

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2017-04-15 10:08 PM

You are most welcome Miss Owl. I wish to read more of you soon.

...just bein' Bluesy

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