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Vagabondinmyownmind
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Posts 22


0 posted 2016-09-30 12:35 PM


Goodbye to you & me
Goodbye to memories
Days past feeling free

Two Souls
Burned like Fire
Quickly spread into desire

It never ended in Peace
Gluttony at the feast
Trust in each other decreased

Members destroyed by deceit
Depression we did meet
We lived on the same street

Love in the air
we didn't even care
into each other eyes, stare

Smashed apart by words
visions became blurred
It was my fault, sounds absurd

I was your curse
Hurt feelings were dispersed
the street corner was no farce

We made the future list
Declared happiness in the mist
sunsets of beauty were kissed

Fantasy raged in the night
Candles upon your skin
Living in the darkest sin

Should I stay or go
No one will ever really know
you still linger in my brain so

You no longer exist in person
I search in the night for your face
As i emotionally move to a new place

All between us were public
Embraced into each other
The world rotated around us
End of the world didn't matter

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Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2018-04-21 07:53 PM


"As I emotionally move to a new place"

Sometimes a 'new place' is the only place that'll have us.

...just bein' Bluesy

Gunslinger
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
2 posted 2021-06-16 10:14 PM


Well written, with an underlying pathos. Write on!
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