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devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3562
Too Far North, Cali


0 posted 06-15-2015 12:31 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina



Defense tops dissection
invader
to zen time.
Further reflections-
are they yours? or mine?
I'm swamped so facile-
Abhor both,
pedestals n'shrines.

Liars love hot pissin'
into bone's pale glow.
clean-picked as cavern
an empty-handed show.
Lover's sworn, now wilted
frozen, deep-six below.

Just feed me sanity?
(hungry mind-torn in cry)
Let warm aphodic drips-
be my 'only' crime?

A cut to the collar
nicks hand n'heart,
a bleed so sanguine
my cold quilt in this dark.
Tucked in sharp ice
(flecking-freezing inside)
I shiver blind, a hermetic design.

Rhyme me arctic reason,
Mr. "oh-silent, as I bleed"...
Punished to please you,
I'm shook hard on need.
Wish sweet, my salty tears
('least savor as you feed.)

Continuing "in know" now,
Heart truly exists as 'yours'
Never intended freeze 'how seen.'
In bitter but better understanding-
My Oath.. to be All that you need~


"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'


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Michael
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1 posted 06-16-2015 09:12 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

The deepest of all darkness is sharpened to a fine edge with pure emotion.  The edge to this one has to be one of the purest I've seen.  Your words are powerful, love... and sear into the mind that reads them.  I was told I "shine in darkness" once... a darkness that was cold, alone, and pitiless.  Your shine here is the only other I have ever seen in a long life that once hoped for it, searched endlessly for it, and eventually gave up on it completely.  I thank God every day now for the light you shine on me, in this darkness that we share.

Michael
devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3562
Too Far North, Cali


2 posted 06-16-2015 01:21 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

*My Oath & my sighs..I lay them at your feet m'darlin..ty!
Dark on dark *duz shine so brightly wif us..

darker-deeper sighs *there..almost like a.. flick  ..mayhap?
mwahs
~T


"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'
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