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devina
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0 posted 2015-06-12 06:22 PM



  
Another hole-
an altered 'broken'..
Past fears. Present tokens.
Volumes spoken, riddled mind
tomes withstood crumble of time.
  
My 'broken' shines
deep wet with heat
glassy puddles, shredded feet.
In every focus
a jaded sign..
Condemned. 'Nary a crime.
Cringe benefits?
They are mine.
  
Seething
rush as pustules
unsaved by deeds of Mellitus.
I kneel, offer heart flesh.
Din' tongue on taste as sated
skin of me, torn..faded.
  
Granted, useless shell.
Eternal 'broken'..
m'wishing well.

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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Michael
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1 posted 2015-06-14 12:04 PM


quote:
Eternal 'broken'..


I so relate tot his line, even though I know you meant it in a different way.  Quite the pair we make, eh?  Hate it when you hurt, babe... even though some damn good poetry comes of it.  :/

Michael

devina
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2 posted 2015-06-15 02:20 PM


I like the thought of our broken pair, my'luv..(grinin' to m'self)
.I will always have a deep appreciation for the dark and for you, Michael.
consider urself *pounced..
mwahs
~T

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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