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KAM39
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0 posted 2014-09-19 04:48 PM


Heart tries to deny what the eyes can see

peeking in,Can't believe it could be


ten waisted years lay there in the bed

The caressing motions bring a deeper color of RED


A sickness, twisted in knots as the door is kicked in

Man full of rage, ungodly thoughts of sin


At least i have the dignity to not do it in our home

thinking of his mistress as he reaches for his gun


Jerking back the covers with death at the door

Mommy and baby playing a tickle war


At a loss for words, his heart filled with shame

Realizing he saw his own reflection in the window pain



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NoWhereman72
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1 posted 2014-10-08 12:58 PM


i really like this poem and it has a really dark feel to it and i think everyone has a reflection that can be full of dark intent because of thoughts of jealousy or even dare i say love.  this really  make you think though , because you never know what lies under the surface of someone who smiles when something is eating at them to feed that dark side.
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