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Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 123
Mesa, Az

0 posted 2014-09-17 08:21 AM


Weed out, sift and discard.

The core is Blanketed, a thin
Veil.

Give me 6 Above and 6 below.

         I am 6
    I am he, I am she
       We are you.

You are few, Slaves are many

     sheep are devoured

I am the Black Land
I lead the lemmings
Nothing is me

My mind is my Master
  I am the Mourning Star
    I Ride the Western Wind
  
I am Original Sin.

It's time to rethink every fact that is imaginable
Survival instinct dwells in a past that is inhabitable
I happen to pull fast ones over the slow p

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KAM39
Junior Member
Posts 26

1 posted 2014-09-19 05:00 PM


Ah yes, the dark one himself. Good write!
Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 123
Mesa, Az
2 posted 2014-11-23 11:32 PM


Thanks for the Open Eyes ^_^

It's time to rethink every fact that is imaginable
Survival instinct dwells in a past that is inhabitable
I happen to pull fast ones over the slow p

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
3 posted 2015-06-06 03:23 PM


Your 'Mourning Star" just dazzles of dark! Love the raw feel & form you put down. This reader feels it..

"Weed out, sift and discard."
~most solid advice.

wicked worx  
~d


"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 123
Mesa, Az
4 posted 2015-06-09 12:54 PM


Thank you davina! Ive been a part of PIP since i was sixteen its hard to believe its been ten years since and im still humbled by the childlike feeling of acceptance and communion from sharing my words with you.
Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 123
Mesa, Az
5 posted 2015-06-09 12:55 PM


Thank you davina! Ive been a part of PIP since i was sixteen its hard to believe its been ten years since and im still humbled by the childlike feeling of acceptance and communion from sharing my words with you.
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