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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2014-05-05 04:18 AM



Abrupt its arrival
Departures the same
The mental survival
Of guilt and shame

Always the stranger
Never left alone
Confusion and anger
All which I've owned

Breaking its silence
Regardless of costs
Strength through defiance
Or forever remain lost

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maddorani1991
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since 2013-03-21
Posts 20

1 posted 2014-05-07 07:33 PM


nice write
Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 123
Mesa, Az
2 posted 2014-12-06 06:28 AM


Nature and Art together Suit
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2014-12-07 08:19 AM


Dear Victor, I am glad to see you posting, though your well written poem conveys sadness.

Hope all is well with you,

Love,
Margherita

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