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A Porcelain Doll

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maddorani1991
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0 posted 05-03-2014 09:15 PM       View Profile for maddorani1991   Email maddorani1991   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani1991

No heart.

No feelings.

Just a void

Only a shell.

Feels Alive.

Staring creepily.

But, its dead

Nothing seems to be satisfying.

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jjote
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1 posted 01-11-2015 09:35 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

just like a porcelain doll,  fragile and empty, and no company at all, as it just stares at you with vacuum eyes.

Nice
devina
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Enjoyed the hard stops here, made your words so very poignant.
nice!
be well
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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