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maddorani1991
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since 2013-03-21
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0 posted 2014-05-03 09:15 PM


No heart.

No feelings.

Just a void

Only a shell.

Feels Alive.

Staring creepily.

But, its dead

Nothing seems to be satisfying.


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jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2015-01-11 09:35 PM


just like a porcelain doll,  fragile and empty, and no company at all, as it just stares at you with vacuum eyes.

Nice

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 2015-04-16 09:35 PM



Enjoyed the hard stops here, made your words so very poignant.
nice!
be well
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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