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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-01-15 03:44 PM



Standard (Stick)
is a little different
of a driving experience
than automatic is.
But you still
have to turn the wheel
when cornering,

...and a car is still a car.

I change lanes
when I change my mind.
I may use the turn signal,
or I may not.
It's my call.
It's my car.
I'm doing the driving,
...make up your own mind.

If you're in another lane
and flip me off in a rage,
I'll follow you to your
last drop of gas.
and then...

If you're nice,
I'll wave to you,
...and tip my hat.

Convertibles are a little
bit different of a
driving experience
than are hardtops.
It's best to put
the top up
when it rains,

...and it rains.

...just bein' Bluesy

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2014-01-23 04:46 PM


It's in "Dark poetry", but it brought smiles to me, because I caught the intimacy between you and the car, something I know of. I love to drive and I don't like automatic change.

A convertible in the rain is like a fish out of water

I greatly enjoyed this, though maybe distractedly I noticed a hue of loneliness.

Great write, Max.

Margherita

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2014-02-03 09:33 PM


Thank you once more for taking time to not only read, but to look deeper into the writing.

My confession to 'metaphorizing' "Driving With Bluesy"may be a bit lame, but I just can't help myself. In conversations, much of what I speak is often ambiguous to the listener while seeming clear to myself.

Perhaps an analyst could be of some use to me.

Thanks again.

...just bein' Bluesy

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