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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
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In The Mirror


0 posted 01-14-2014 08:54 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Were your
stems not
strong enough
to hold
your gentle petals?

Was your
earthen residence
not a comfort
to you?

Have you now
found peace
where a fairy's wings
might flutter?

Do
you
still
think
of me?

...just bein' Bluesy

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Margherita
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Eternity


1 posted 01-23-2014 04:39 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

This tears my heart apart, dear Max. It is beautifully sad.

Margherita
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


2 posted 02-03-2014 09:39 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I very much appreciate your sentiment. This was written during a period of despondency that many others may also relate to.

We're human, and you and I both are familiar with a wide spectrum of experiences that are sometimes revealed in the words we write.

Many bright blessings to you.

Regards from Bluesy

...just bein' Bluesy

DaysofView
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Billy's Best Half


3 posted 04-01-2014 11:54 PM       View Profile for DaysofView   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DaysofView

Awww. It is sad. I hope it had a happy ending.

To call oneself a poet is a vain remark indeed. After you're dead, let others eulogize you as such if they feel you are worthy.

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