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A ghosts reqiuem

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Walter Poe
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0 posted 11-13-2013 06:15 PM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Walter Poe

I came here because noone will see
It is only for those who do not know me
Or will not have any resonance to my words

I am alone

I created this reality
through my own decisions
each right in its own way

So I fear

My life collapses
I have little remaining
Fake hope from a empty source

I am unwanted

It is as it should be
I am less than I was
much less than I could have been

I am a faint outline

An unfilled void
emptied of life unfulfilled
incapable of joy of fun friendless

I am the unwanted

I am who I chose to be
Unloved, incapable of love
I am reviled and rightfully so

I am dead inside

I am the snow, the earth
I am beauty and I sleep
the final sleep under the stars

Outside of a dog, a book is a man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read.

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River
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since 09-16-2003
Posts 627
my own little world


1 posted 01-04-2014 03:35 AM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for River

"I am a faint outline"  

i really like this line!
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
Posts 243
In The Mirror


2 posted 02-19-2014 11:18 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

An extraordinary amount of depth in your writing. Whether real or imagined from the pen's perspective, the human drama within your work is strikingly real.

The last few lines seem to soften the blow somewhat, but all that moves toward the end is quite powerful.

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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