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littlemonster
Junior Member
since 2010-05-06
Posts 39
UK

0 posted 2013-04-25 05:55 PM



Some days
I know too much
and not enough
at all
like I have stared
into the very heart
of life
yet come away
aching.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2014-01-11 09:22 PM


It has been said that some days are diamonds while others are stone. Regardless of the their individual value, either for wealth or state of mind, both sink at about the same rate.
How deep is the water? How long can we hold our breath?
It appears to me after reading your fine work, that living is the same basic thing. We seem to be holding our breath for as long as we can. Sometimes, the longer we hold it the more it hurts.

...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (01-11-2014 11:49 PM).]

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