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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2013-03-06 09:13 PM





Vodka or lace?
Your choice,
sex and disgrace.
All you, no me,
wondering eyes,
prying lies.
Don't fight it,
simply deny it.
Vodka or lace?
Either way,
cover your dirty little face.


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david3
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since 2013-03-02
Posts 15
ohio
1 posted 2013-03-06 11:38 PM


Not sure I fully understood but this is very good. very expressive, very emotional, very touching. You have talent.

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