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Sick Little Human

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LaGraceLa
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since 01-30-2011
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0 posted 01-30-2013 09:41 PM       View Profile for LaGraceLa   Email LaGraceLa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LaGraceLa


Little red birds
Singing in the trees
Little girls playing
Down on bloody knees.

Listen to the laugh,
Listen to the joy
Listen the the breaking
Of silly little toys.

Innocence is easy,
Keeping it is hard
Especially with him
Playing along.

Don't you know it's not okay,
Don't you know it's wrong
To take the little girl
Who was just wondering along.

Sick little human
Scream the birds to him.
Sick little human
To act on every whim.
© Copyright 2013 Sarah Grace - All Rights Reserved
MorningStar
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since 10-26-2009
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1 posted 03-12-2013 01:36 PM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MorningStar

This makes me feel anger...
Well done.

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

Fabiani
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Posts 99
Mesa, Az


2 posted 12-07-2014 06:19 PM       View Profile for Fabiani   Email Fabiani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fabiani

Reminiscent of William Blake and the allegory of esoteric enlightment

It's time to rethink every fact that is imaginable
Survival instinct dwells in a past that is inhabitable
I happen to pull fast ones over the slow p

devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3505
Too Far North, Cali


3 posted 06-06-2015 03:35 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

"Listen the the breaking
Of silly little toys."
~This line just haunts, solid image!

Your last stanza tears me to pieces.
An over'all excellent write.
To your subject matter, I hope your words
heal anyone going through this; To know life
can change and be better than this pain.

hugs & kudos poet!
~d



"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'
 
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