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arofriend New Member
since 2012-06-07
Posts 9 |
There's something new about the way he moves his fingers across the blackness anxiety rippling hovering over the deep formless void awaiting terrifying sublimation into... they talked about it on TV and in school about how nobody cares about how you're on your own to lose friends once they get to know you know your fears know your likes understand your dislikes could abandon you for being like that could report you for saying that deprive you of your freedom There's something old about the way I believe everything I read tracing fingers across the white anxiety growing into an adult nothing hovering amid the deep formless void rigid conformity to the unknown shape we're all supposed to know. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This is absolutely amazing, stunning, in fact. You have a real talent, wonderful  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Welcome! "The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy |
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arofriend New Member
since 2012-06-07
Posts 9 |
Thank you very much. That was pretty cool |
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