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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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U.S , Ca

0 posted 2012-03-14 02:22 PM



you look at me and let me come closer
closer and yet you do nothing still
i get to close
you back away
reject me
eject me out of you life
i leave with tearful eyes and a bloody heart
but every day i come again
and i end up just the same
till one day my heart
it disappears
or rather turns to stone
you look around for me
but i am gone
or rather i can't respomd
you've turned me into stone
a stone impermeable to all emoition
now you curse me
saying that i lied
but i did not
i simply tired
of mixe messages
and uncertainity

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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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houston,tx
1 posted 2012-05-01 11:42 PM


man i can somehow relate to this one
ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
2 posted 2012-05-02 10:40 AM


started to post more in the open forums
noodles6996
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since 2012-06-16
Posts 7

3 posted 2012-06-16 02:44 AM


this is pretty raw, almost sense something as if you penned it with melancholy ferocity.
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